There is already many thing said about issues of corruption by civil Society and B. Ramdev etc......but this is a problem which has been rusted the society(Please read it with wider meaning) for years , so, we cannot expect to erradicate it immediatetly. Even Govt. also has no magical stick for it. But, we certainly expect a strong will from Govt. towards this demand from the Society, but unfortunately attitude of Govt is really dissappointing this so called largest Democracy.
Here, I feel that merely one Govt.or one party is not responsible for the present scenario of the societies, but it is collective failure all political parties , Governments as well as the biggest culprits we common people's "let it go" attitude.But, the best part is that we are awaking and there is "never so late", so we should now raise our voice but within the framework of our constitution and strenthen the voice already raised for the same , but also be aware that no one should take political advantage to fulfill his selfish interest.
Remember ...its difficult to fight with our own people than aliegn , we just have to correctly remeber and take inspiration from Geeta Updesh.
well,1st of all i would like to congratulate u for being bold enough to put ur thoughts in words before us and asking for criticism and i beleive it will definitely hone up ur writing skills in the long run
ReplyDeleteAs far as criticism is concerned,shekharjee, Perhaps Grammar is an area where u should be more consistent e.g. has been + ving or has + v3(2nd line), prepositions are missing(4th and6th line),a few sentences are incomplete also there are some spelling mistakes like awaking should be replaced by awakening,eradicate,alien,strengthen,disappointi-ng,remember, it's ,also remember correctly rather than correctly remember. i know that most of them are just trivial mistakes and u know them but since u have asked for public scrutiny so i have just concentrated on the grammatical aspects this time i hope u will continue with ur good work and i wish u luck.